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Gaaahh! Horrid, horrid cliffhanger!!!! Update really really soon please!!!!

A great chapter. I love the Governor! He's just so cute and caring and Jack is going to do everything he can to get Nell back. Whenever I read this story it just keeps throwing me back because I think you've done all the twists and turns but then suddenly you hit us with more! It's amazing your imagination and I'm very impressed! I'm also anticipating a few more twists before the end and can I just say wooooo to Captain Bryant!!! :D I like him and Norrie, they're so cute!

Oh. My. Goodness. Update ASAP!

This is the best POTC story I have read bar-none. Please don't wait too long to update! I hope that after you are finished with this story (which makes me sad to think it will be over soon), I hope that you go on to write other stories in the POTC fandom as well on this site. You really are very gifted!

I luv your story! Keep Writin' Mate! I can't wait fer the updates. I love that you throw in twists an' turns that I don't really expect, like here I thought we were done with those blasted monks and I thought that Beaumont and De Mornay were safely tucked away in the Pearl's brig where they couldn't hurt Nell...an' then you go an' proved me wrong an' brought back the monks an' then Beaumont an' De Mornay escaped an' kidnaped Nell again...for a 3rd bloody time, not to mention the Gov'ner. That girl needs to learn how to fight better... 'specially if she's gonna be livin' on the Pearl with Jack. She can't keep gettin' hit over the head. Sooner or later she'll have so much brain damage from bein' hit on the head she'll be walkin, talkin' and actin' like Jack! lol. Poor Gov'ner gettin' shot in th' arm. I bet he's never experianced that kind o' pain 'afore. All I can say is....UPDATE SOON!!! PLEASE???

As Always...Take What Ye Can...Give Nothin' Back!
Mrs Capt Jack Sparrows

erm...where to start? Well, first of all, I love this story! I sort of gave up on the potc fandom after a while because most of the stories just weren't worth the effort to read. However, I just saw Dead Man's Chest, and it renewed my interest in the fandom. So, my hope is restored, by you.
Anyway, enough of my rambling. I thought the idea of the monks was really good, and really creepy. Yeesh... the hand in the cave bit almost gave me a panic attack. And the priest in Aruba, too, that was well done. I just have to remind myself not to read at night, otherwise I can't fall asleep afterward!
Uh... constructive criticism... not much to say, I think everyone is almost always in character, especially Jack. Just a few spelling errors. And one more thing- is it too much to hope that Norrington and Bryant might get together? I think they'd be cute, sort of like a forbidden love in regimentals type of thing.
Thank you for taking the time to write and post. I think if you still want to be a professional writer, you have the talent, so go for it!
Good luck, and have a great day, wherever you are.
-Pokey

more more i need somthing to read.

Oh dear, things really aren't going Jack's way at all and why does it always have to be the Governor?! Not that I'm cpmplaining, another very good chapter and another one soon please. I just hope the ending is happy....

oh this is exciting!! I'm all fired up b/c i just saw PotC 2 at midnight last night, and it was so good!!! EEEE!!! Although, this story would have made a good plot for the movie too, and i was slightly disconcerted when there was nothing about monks or an island in the second movie:)

haha! wow an exciting chapter.
it felt like it was way too short! however, yes, many my questions were answered. thanks! :D
i liked the idea with the longboats and the rope being the 'bridge' for the monks from the island to the pearl. *eyes any objects in my room that might be supernatural*
and wow! suddenly gilette and the governor are in this too! that actually made me smile. (although the situation is super serious)
well i BEG YOU to update soon again! because i simply can't wait to see what happens with poor nell on board of the heron.
and when will jack finally just *kill* these two bitches for keep stirring up trouble?
oh! and somehow i have a feeling that it isn't enough to just destroy all the remains of the island that would be abord the pearl... hm...

AW WELL i loved this chapter, very hectic! :D
please please please update soon!