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for The Map

by Boshomengro

person M M
schedule June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh! So glad I figured out how to find you agian. Wonderful as always.
person night
schedule June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wait! how did they trick the cabin boy on staying on the island?
and why? As for the islanders: the islanders and the monks are on the same side, right? so they don't fight each other..?
aaaand a last thing: how come the monks/ghosts/voices follow jack & co. when they didn't haunt demornay and beaumont (back when they first went onto the island to hide the treasure)?
i mean, after all, they both left leaving dead buddies & friends behind, so, theoretically, jack and beaumont/demornay suffered equal amounts of 'soul loss' on the island.
shouldn't that leave jack unhaunted as it did with beaumont and demornay the first time they went on the island?
maybe i just missunderstood but i'm slightly confused. heh, and maybe just really tired when i read it...
update soon! i have a feeling some of my questions will be answered in the next chappy.
i apologize for my stupidity, heh. ^_^'
person Danell
schedule June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! I just got done catching up on this fic. I absolutely love it. I can't believe how great it is. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please please please update soon.
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Bloody hell! I knew that was coming - have known since they left the island but it still didn't stop it coming as a shock! That was an excellant chapter, m'dear, not to mention HOT!
person jarrah
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg! i love your story!
and jack FINALLY admitting that he loves her was very cute.
BUT PLEASE DON'T TEAR THESE TWO APART (nell and jack,lol) or i will boycott the reading!! (Jk although i'd be very sad)
UPDATE SOOOOON

person Charli
schedule June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It was a fantastic chapter again and Nell and Jack are so cute together especially when he told her he loved her but now the monks have taken her and the other two and whats going to happen?! too much suspense i think! lol No I adore this story and it really makes my day when you update :D More soon please and hopefully nothing bad will happen to Nell... please?! This is the most original story I have ever read so thank you! xx
person lili
schedule June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really liked the slower pace of this chapter. it was relaxing after so much turmoil.
love your work!

lili
person charli
schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
fantastic i love this story so much. update soon xxx
person anna
schedule June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like long chapters madame!!

rcok on. you get better and better, and i love your sense of comic relief.
person depp.me
schedule April 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! Another update....don't let me stop ya!