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for Making a Move

by Plum

person sweetjohnnyfan
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Its really good lol and funny. I can't wait to read more. Keep going.
person dugadugabowbow
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome story!! Please review soon!
person blossom
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi! nice story, nice start! you should really update it I'm in need!! lol, toodles!
blossom
person lili
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really like the plot of this story, its a lot of fun....but i think things were getting a bit confusing continuity wise towards the end of that second chapter...maybe make it a little clearer who's talking to who

keep up the good work!
person bluegal
schedule June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is looking really good already. I can't wait for more!
person Gslinger
schedule June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hurry write more ....I can't wait! G