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for Aid'ian's Doctrine

by Edison

person INC
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHat is for breakfast> Tro'net bleeding somewhere from Aid'ian's fisr and Santana in the bed. I need more this is fabulous
person Viewerfinder
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Downtime I Love your writing and I hope you update soon because Mea will be the battle ground for Tro'net and Aid'ian and the love nest for Santana and ?.
person Della Bear
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YEs you updated and I think Tro'net is very dangerous with nothing to lose and evrything to gain, but Aid'ian is very dangerous also with everything he wants and needs in his sights. A colossal collision is going to happen. Nola needs to get lost. BTW where is her Momma! Awesome stuff
person Bee
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh Ajax, another fabulous chapter! I really like Aidian and it will be interesting to see a Warrior General courting Santana...lovely, lovely, lovely!
Keep the chapters coming!!
person Allure
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aid'ian needs a mate and He has his sights set on Santana can we have thier story at Mea please Update Please I am asking nicely:)
person Greyson
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is Awesome . Tro'net does nto want to die and will do anything to have a mate his father would approve of and that is She'bach's daughter. I can see a serious beat down. Aid'ian will NOT tolerate him near Santana. Tro'net is Slim. Loki is a mess and I hope he loses Nola in the desert. LOL I love this story and I hope you update faster Please I need it
person shortest_warrior
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Tro'net's an ass Ajax. Have him die painfully slow. Then again he and Nola suit each other well. Keep up the good work because I need to know what Aid'ian has for breakfast. Santana on toast maybe. Need to know please.
person WTLM
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh What a piece of work he tries to touch her then he is apologizing to her, I love Santana's line that was AWESOME!! SO IS THIS CHAPTER. Aid'ian left no doubt what he wanted and even gave up the communicator. He wants a lot of alone time . And Tron'net does not wish to die, he will if he interferes with Aid'ian. This is freakin fabulous!
person Novicegirl
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAYAY I love when you all update at once Especially YOU this was EXCELLENT Tro'net is going to see his death ASAP. I hope Loki loses Nola somewhere. I hate her prissy , evil , BITCH. I Love this story have I said that yet. Keep it going and going
person Kraven
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful stuff Ajax, Tro'net is just trying not to die at the hands of his father He wnats his love not hate; there is just one problem. Aid'ian said no!. He is a creep and evil the worse kind of creature. If he and Nola team up Look out!