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for Aid'ian's Doctrine

by Edison

person Greyson
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mea let's go, I know Aid'ian will be breaking boenes along the way if Tro'net gets out of line; and Nola needs a good hard SLAP! AWESOME WRITING!
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
When are they going to get to Mea they have been on the loading dock for a while. Will we find out about Nola's momma and will Aid'ian's rough side come into view all these things I wish to know so please update pretty please.
person aquamum
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story.
I love your writing and I love your strong characters.
The trip to Mea will be very interesting.
person whatever
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story awesome writing. Can't wait for Mea and the stuuf that will going down there. Awesome Please update
person SafeHaven
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Capital Idea and I like it. I think it is a go! Keep going (To all others this message will make no sense)LOL
person Hornet
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome I can nnot wait for you to update,I must know What Tro'net and Nola are going to do and of course Aid'ian and Santana please hurry
person Deverwood
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It is about time!! I love the teasing though, but I can't wait for the real Aid'ian to come out and he get down and dirty. Keep it going and update soon Thanks FOR WRITING!!!!
person AngelaH
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What no update yet SLACKER! update
person Anon
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YESS!!! Alone time Update soon please
person karmaxp
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aid'ian reminds me of one of my characters General Ashe, I love him and I love your character also And I can not wait for you to update;and yes this is a ploy to get you to do it faster. I love this story that much Thanks for listening. Lorna