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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am going to print this story up so I can read it again and again when I away from the computer with the little crumb snatchers. this story is so good I can not waot for you to update it is like a breath of fresh air. It is totally my top story I look for Keep up the AWESOME WRITING MS AJAX
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
finally! some time alone and we get to see that superior MALE side of Aid'ian (Love the name)maybe some lovin' maybe, but I like this speed keep it and let it be natural.
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope there is a creature on Mea that will eat Tro'net and Nola LOL I wnat some Alone time for Santana and Aid'ian. Love the chemistry between these two ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT. MARVELOUS WRITING
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August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please Update soon!
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August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That part with Nola was AWESOME!!! I think that is how people like her would act if they thought they were happy about hurting someone. I love Aid'ian's mystery about his skills. Dude did alittle killing. With a father like Tarnish Tro'net better watch out because aid'ian is thinking of an unfortunate accident of he looks at Santana like dinner. Santana and Aid'ian are HMMMMMMM. I LOVE this it is MAGINIFICENT well thought out and I am hooked... Spider
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August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL NOla is a piece of work Great writing!!!! Santana and Aid'ian I love them just like you have it slow and let it build. I think at Mea it gonna flame!LOL. Tro'net man he can't win. either his father will kill him or Aid'ian. I must have more so give us the next chapter please this is AWESOME
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August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Tre'not is so going to get a beatdown from Aid'ian. He's such a discrace. I sense a catfight between Nola and Santana (I'm placing my bets on Santana).
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August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That is one crazy Bitch, joy in herheart and a dance in her step.LOL She is crazy. I love Santana's line Do you require any help? At the end where she grabs her arm. She's goign to beat her at Mea. Love her and Aid'ian it is GOOD! Tro'net could be seeing death at Mea id Aid'ian decides so. Can not wait for the trip and the hot teasing you write Love it Love it!! Awesome update. What did Meh'gah do with Pria'ne?
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August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME Writing I love this I see a fight on two fronts and Mea will be the battle ground. Santana already warned her. Tre'not should just go home and face his father. I want more teasing More and More to lead to stuff and lots of it!!! Aid'ian I love that name!!!!
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August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well I think Nola sees Santana is alright and from the reaction of the Males, looking good too. I love the chemistry between she and Aid'ian it is verging on a flame then a total rampannt fire!!!! I need more, crave it, so write it! Awesome I mean it!