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for Aid'ian's Doctrine

by Edison

person WTLM
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aid'ian has some secret killing sprees we don't know about. Tro'net and Nola have a history, for soem reason I don't think it was sexual. Nola is still a bitch and Santana is going to kick her butt and then Aid'ian will punish her in a way I think he desperately wantse too. I CAN'T WAIT THIS IS FANSTATIC
person AngelaH
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aid'ian and Santana need alot of ALONE TIME. Tro'net has no chance and no friends unless those three come with him. Nola is a true Bitch . i Loved that scene where she's acting out stuff I think crazy people do that.LOL This is AWESOME WRITING you are TEASING US WITH THIS DISPLAY and I LOVE IT!!!!!
person shortest_warrior
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You have to kill Tro'net. That Yautja needs to die he does and painfully. Ok.
person INC
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOVE this story and I think that Tron'net already knows his limit unless Aid'ian has to instruct him. Nola deserves a nice long talk from Santana. Aid'ian and Santana should have a moonlit walk and let nature run rampant LOL Love the teasing keep it up.
person evoD
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aid'ian and Santana are my fav couple now if you make them a couple. You better. This is great please keep up your regular updating I love this story.
person zegra
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Tro'net not a chance and Aid'ian doesn't even want you looking at her. Nola crazy and a bitch. I hope Santana has a nic long talk with her. Aid'ian has a side he does not want her to see, that is usually the good bad side yummy!!!! Love alll your
Awesome updates!
person Walkingpapers
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Tro'net is a piece of work, he nad Nola deserve each other and I don't think they had a sexual relationship. She would keep herself pure for Aid'ian. Aid'ian and Santana need some time alone at Mea. I think Loki knows this and you know he does what is best for the clan.
person Pokoko
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
If Nola is so eager for a mate let her have Tro’net, those two are "perfect" for each other. *snicker* I cannot wait for a really hot Aid’ian/Santana moment! It's bound to be yummy!XD
person JesseLou
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*squeal* Finally! Those two get some alone time! Og, update soon, please?! ^_^
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are totally Awesome at this. I am so excited they will finally be alone I don't know what to do but ask you to update. This is my favorite story It is so refreshing. That is the only way I can describe it, It makes me feel good and you have to continue PLEASE.