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for Aid'ian's Doctrine

by Edison

person Anon
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I Know this already that I will become very angry if you don't finish this. I love it and I wnat the next chapter already. This is Awesome. Aid'ian and Santana areto be together I love the teasing and Nola BEAT DOWN is all I can tell ya. AWesome again continue.
person Della Bear
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Teasing us is a punishable offense. I LOVE IT. Ais'ian amd Santana are SWEET ! NOla needs some home schooling OLD STYLE! LOVE THIS!
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOVING IT ALL THE WAY! Aid'ian and Santana are sizzling keep up the teasing I love it; and Nola slice her in half or maybe her father will kill her. Awesome work keep it up
person wydow
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GLORIOUS!! I love the teasing and I see Tre'not as trouble in the worse way if he teams with Nola but I can't see that because she is too selfish and a true BITCH!
Keep on writing Ajax household cleaner
person karmaxp
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another Awesome chapter to add to an already awesome story. Nola is as everyone else says a BITCH! I hope Aid'ian continues to shun her and continue to tease us with Santana. I love this couple. Continue please!!!!!
person caz
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yarrrrrrrrrrrr.
:D
update. like, now.
person Allure
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful story this is becoming I am looking for it more and more. Aid'ian and Santana are goign to be hott when you get them together. I love the teasing the almost kisses and touches. Awesome writing please keep it up Blueviper
person Viewerfinder
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fanstatic writing Girlie. I am so happy this is here to read I love it. Aid'ian and Santana deserve each other. He looks after her, keeps her safe. come on! Nola I have two words Jealous Bitch!
person Rhayn
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It just keeps pulling me in deeper and deeper. I love all the characters and hate some. Aid'ian and Santana are beautiful I can't get enough and I need you to update this because Tre'not sounds like a wrench in the works. Marvelous
person AngelaH
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I guess when you want something you will do anything to have it. Nola is dead sure that Aid'ian wants Santana, and she probably is right. I see Santana starting to notice the General's advances. I like the teasing it is refreshing. Chapter 4 thank you this is AWESOME

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