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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad I checked this is Awesome I can not wait for the next chapter
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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the teasing you are doing. Who is Tro'net? He does not sound like a well liked Yuatja. Nola needs a beating she is a Bitch. Write the next chapter please This is becoming one of my favorite stories.
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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You should give Nola to Pria'ne; wouldn't that be nice. You are a horrible tease Excellent chapter I was glued to my seat keep it up.
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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nola should be floating outside the ship with Pria'ne. WHat a thing to do just leave her. Love the teasing with Aid'ian and Santana. I guess he has his plan of battle a Doctrine sort of speak. Great chapter
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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
See having no patience paid off.LOL I think Tre'not (spelling) Will help Nola because he sounds like he will be a Bad blood like her. I love the relationship between Aid'ian and Santana keep it just like that the almost stuff. Excellent work!
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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT MORE!
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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I see turmoil ahead for Santana if Nola sees Aid'ian with her. Hey I'm looking forward to it. Keep going this is AWESOME
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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I read all three chapters and I am hooked.
Nola is truly a bitch! Plus at the same time she is a Bad Blood because she wants to get rid of Santana in order to get Aid'ian. Forget tossing her out of the airlock with that sick freak Pria'ne. Send them off to a Xenomorph infested planet and leave them there. But that's just me. This Tre'not fellow, hmm. I get a feeling he's a Bad Blood as well.
I like the fact that Aid'ian and Santana should be together and I am always rooting for it. Fantastic work.
Nola is truly a bitch! Plus at the same time she is a Bad Blood because she wants to get rid of Santana in order to get Aid'ian. Forget tossing her out of the airlock with that sick freak Pria'ne. Send them off to a Xenomorph infested planet and leave them there. But that's just me. This Tre'not fellow, hmm. I get a feeling he's a Bad Blood as well.
I like the fact that Aid'ian and Santana should be together and I am always rooting for it. Fantastic work.
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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT! What Nola did is probably one of the lowest things I ever read on aff. I mean WHAT A BITCH!!! I so want Santana and Aid'ian together it ain't even funny. I am like glued to this whenever I read it. This is totally COOOLLLL!
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August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great stoy so far. I hope so see more chapters soon. :) Keep up the good work.