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for Aid'ian's Doctrine

by Edison

schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nola is a selfish piece of crap. I so hate her . Aid'ian should never have to touch her EVER! I love Santana with Aid'ian . Love this Guy wants Girl stuff. excellent update
person wydow
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay is it too early to start begging for an update; four days have gone by already, the newness has worn off,and you must deal with my constant badgering now. ( I mean this with love) :) So hurry and update.....Spider
person Ajax
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SAfeHaven: How high does your Bitch meter go?
prairiefire: Sorry that Nola is alot like your mother....SSSSOOOOOOORRRRRRYYYYYY
Della Bear: I have not decided where her Momma at LOLOLOLOLOLOL
Spider: I have weighed your reasons and found them just and I will update today.
Ajax
person lil'bit
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aid'ian *sighs* I love the almostives and could haves with the kisses LOVE THAT!!!!! Nola oh my what a BITCH. I mean LOW BITCH. Even if she did not have to do much to make him try to hurt Santana that is so WRONG. AWESOME WRITING PULLED ME IN AND SAT ME DOWN!!!!
person INC
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW Awesome chapter. Love everything in it.Santana starting to notice things Aid'ian bringing his lady dinner .NIICE Nola that Bitch!. I love this next chapter Please!
person Harbor
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOVING IT !!!! I love Aid'ian getting clean for his Santana, having dinner waiting for her, oh yeah beating the crap out of Pria'ne. HMMMMM.Nola off the Bitch meter with just those words she spoke. I was flabergasted. Magnificent MORE!!!
person Leedar
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was an excellent chapter I loved it. Nola needs a beat down SERIOUSLY! I Love Aid'ian looking out for what he wants and needs. EXCELLENT Next chapter
person Payden
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nola is starting off at Evil and I can only see her getting worse. Aid'ian bum rushing a yautja classic. I love how you have made the relationship between he and Santana absolutely love it. Continue Please
person Viewerfinder
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent job for your first fic. I already hate Nola and I think Aid'ian and Santana will be SEXY !!!!! MORE
person Hornet
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The second chapter was awesome getting to know Nola and her everything I want is everyhing I see attitude. She needs to be knocked down. I think Aid'ian , who is a SEXY BEAST, his rejection will only make her try harder. I love Santana's personality I hope she stays a little clueless to the General, make him work! Awesome writing and keep it up.