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July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like what you have have here so far. Nola the bitch, Aid'ian the sexy beast and Santana warrior daughter. Write some more I will be watching for this HONEST
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July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am sorry for the second post but I have no patience and I have a question about Nola.
Where her Momma at? LOL I still think this is like Awesome!!
Where her Momma at? LOL I still think this is like Awesome!!
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July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I REALLY like this and all the cast of characters; this is looking Sweet keep it going.
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July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am impressed this is a grabber type of story from the opening and now you just have us setlling in for the long haul. I know that I am. This is awesome writing and I can't wait for chapter three
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July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know I get the strange feeling that I am going to love this story because of the writing, plot, characters those you love to hate and your Penname.....Piano manner
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July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love this piece of fiction because it is different and it is very good. Keep writing
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July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this. I hate Nola already. Aid'ian sounds so hot. Keep up the good work.
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July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Downtime. Well I must say that you have another fan in me. This is going to be a classic because it has all the things you need to be awesome and the ability to hold one's attention. You are magnificent keep it up.
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July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You keep this up and I will be reading only waiting for you to post. SERIOUSLY! This is amazing; a classic concept done Yuatja style. Love it and keep writing. Hey I like your Penname
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July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Are you serious ending like that. I need more. I like this and it is Awesome for your first fan fiction. You need to update more. LOL I will be checking on this. Hey keep it on top where it belongs.