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July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nola is serious isn't she? Aid'ian is one sexy General that knows what he wants. I like Santana and how she acts with Aid'ian. You must update this I think it is SWEET and Classic boy wants girl thingy Smart.
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July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Welcome and with Great writing, I love it and am so glad to read something like this. I'm hooked keep going
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July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this already and you will be hounded by me and others who I can get to do it if you slack off. This is great fresh blood with a kick. Go on!
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July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow This was even better than the beginning. Aid'ian is going to have to come up with a strategy for getting Santana, while Nola would lay down anywhere for him. Love it and Santana with Sexy Aid'ian. Great Chapter
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July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love how you tell about each character. Nola is going to be ruthless and Aid'ian is hatching a strategy to get Santana isn't he. This is very very good and I think you should grace us with more, hey think about it and get back to me.
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July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know, Nola sounds a lot like my mother. She wants what she wants, she thinks deserves to get it, and to hell with anyone in her way. And when things don't go her way, she rags on the people around her.
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July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I do not like Nola. You are doing an AWESOME JOB!
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July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AJAX! I thought the beginning was Awesome and then you turn around and make the second chapter even more Awesome than the first. You keep this up and I will just be reading your stuff. I mean it keep it up this is....well AWESOME Jakes
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July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow I like it. What a great start to this. If you continue I will be reading another good story.
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July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GOOD GOOD GOOD. Now continue with more of this. Like the flow and the introduction to the characters.