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for Aid'ian's Doctrine

by Edison

person SyJen
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWesome chapter are you writing the next one right now? Well I will be waiting.
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
In Mea, Aid'ian should kill Tro'net in a freak fighting accident or just kick his ass for real. Nola should fall into a nest of some kind of blodd sucking spiders and die, Santana should have a problem keeping her clothing on. That is what I think :)AWESOME chapter
person Parts
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Trully awesome story and this chapter was as usual. Tro'net has a problem called Aid'ian. I wonder what he will try I can not wait for the next chapter.
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
All your writing is awesome Ajax and I wait for more what can Tro'net possibly do to Aid'ian to have Santana.NOTHING!
person Anon
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Tro'net needs a beating and Nola needs to get eaten by some desert creature. Aid'ian and Santana will they finally be alone? LOve the writing
person Payden
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Let him break his other hand Creep! He is so creepy to me. Aid'ian had better be careful Tro'net is the type to stab you when he says he does not have a blade. Awesome chapter as always.
person Spider too lazy to log in
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aid'ian cracking his fist in Tro'net's face Loved it. Ahhh. Ajax I absolutely love this fic please update again soon it is awesome.
person evoD
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Have i mentioned how much I love this story. I love evry word written in it ,for it , about it. THis is some Aweosme stuff I wonder what kind of fight Tro'net will out up and will Aid'ian and Santana be alone long enough to just KISS I love this romantic side keep it up.
person Allure
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
TRo'net needs a good whipping and I hope Aid'ian gives it to him or Loki either way he will be beaten. More!
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to write that if you are going to start a mailing list *wink* PUT ME ON IT PLEASE I love this story.