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for First Among Commanders

by hellsraven

person Kyradda
schedule September 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome. I love a little Vakko/Riddick and this story shows great promise... Will you be finishing it?
schedule May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love a Riddick and Vaako pairing. Sorry there wasn't more
person Aresy
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
^_^ I like how u picked up right after the end of the movie. This already sounds good, please continue!!!
person Toki Mirage
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is a cool idea! update damnit! *pouts* Such a teaser... didn't even get to see a kiss... *sniffles* are you ever planning on updating? if you do, email me please!! ^^
person wishdragon
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love the story cann't wait for more chapters. you have done a great job on writing this story it holds you interest and you cann't wait to see were they going. thanks
person wishdragon
schedule August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
readed your story i like it but this chapter was a little short. are you going to write more soon. i love R and V stories so i hope to read more of this one soon. wishdragon
person RJ
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey not bad so far. Love to read more. Love R/V stories so few out there. Please update soon! Keep up the hard work. Peace! :)
person Anon
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't usually review for adultfanfiction, but this pair lacks in fics and I want to see this continue so please do