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for Control

by angelsdee

person Bob
schedule July 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is a weird story, but you used the characters and took them off the topic of street racing to settle them in a new world with a beautiful setting. Your ideas are fantastic but I don't know if your mind is going to be like this and turn the original story into a non-car story. You mentioned a couple of cars but rarely. Next time when writing a story like this, I like you to give the audience a brief summary whether or not this is on same topic as the original. Nevertheless, GREAT plot and very interesting storyline. The fights are sudden, but I would rate it a 5 star story.
person duckray1
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey this story was amazing I hope you write another one just like this one. Aand please dont leave out the sex that was what made this one so good. Thank you so much.

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