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by angiebeckham

schedule September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Fucking fantastic. You are most certainly a new age writer. Thanks for the read. Exactly what I was looking for.
person Lydia Nightshade
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahahahahahahahaa!!!

Not the story, the "fuck you Disney" note almost made me piss myself. It was so random. Thanks for this as I'm one of the non-con loving monkeys out there. I'd love more, but I understand writer's block all too well.
person Virtual_Libertine
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well Dear, I dont think there is anything wrong with it. Then again, I'm a sadist... By the bye, I love the note at the end.
person AnAngelInHell
schedule October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mean... but hot. Yes, fuck Disney. I think I like you....
person Ashley
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I dunno why, but I like it! lol!
person DISNEY DOESN'T LIKE SLASH!?
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHA!!! jacks so mean to will....what would have happend if this really did occur....you KNOW ALOT!of people would have gone ta see it..so disney can go screw themselves SLASH SELLS!!!
person SecludedButterfly
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved this, you captured Captain Jack perfectly
person Barbara
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Was going to start this review with a sly comment like: "You seem angry. Have we threatened you before?" All in fun, mind you.

I do have to say that you have captured something deliciously enticing in your mean, drunk Jack. I can't help but get the feeling that Jack and Will have played this Q&A game before...maybe Will likes it? Whatever...if non-con erotica was your goal, I would say you met it.

BTW, I don't really care for monkeys.