rate_review Reviews

You're a good writer and this smut is extremely hot, but it would be so much better with some paragraphing! In one huge chunk it's overwhelming and hard to read. I don't know whether it's just a formatting error but with some proper formatting it would be fantastic. The writing itself has a lot of potential and there is some very nice imagery. Good job.

That was wonderful. I had searched everywhere for a story like this. I loved it.

....hot. Watched the movie on the telly, and had to read a fic based on it. Your portrayal of Jake's desire for Will was wonderfully written, as was the interaction between the two.

Yay! I'm not the only one who's mind went to this conclusion! Wondeful story. And hot too! Who cares that they are brothers! I liked it so much I am writing my own Brother's Grimm story. I want you to betta it for me but I don't know how to contact you!!

This is really sweet, sexy... AND literate, as is appropriate for a tale about the Brothers Grimm. The language is far from archaic, yet it is refined and appropriately euphemistic. You capture the characters and convey the circumstances well, and the tension, yet the love seems plausible and real. Of course I'm eager to see how this continues as the two men work on their relationship in its new form.

After wacthing this movie, it really got to me how slashable they are. LOL

Good one! And very IC. ^^

This is very cute. And kinda sad in the end. I am not really good at explainging, so if I start saying why I like it you ;ight read something completely... in the opposite direction or without sense. So just, take my word(s) for it, and believe it to be very cute. And sad. and yummy.

:D Chi No Hana

Oh my god, that was great. I actually had to mute the television because it was clashing with the beauty of your story. And can I just say that I am glad that I wasn't the only one to see the chemistry between the brothers? Your fanfic was just...Wow is the only word to discribe it. I hope you write more of it or write another one explaining about wheather or not it was inneundo. Riding sex with the Grimm brothers...I think my brain just broke. Thank you for this month's dreams! I needed something new and good and you provided perfectly. Thank you.

Exactly what I was looking for post-movie. Beautifully written and highly engaging. Great job!

Those other reviews that you recieved hardly seems worth the effort. I thought it to be seven when it was really three! How disappointing it must have been. I hate doubles and tripples. Especially that last reviewer. If you're going to continue, continue! Anyway, I really did enjoy reading this. Though how the paragraphs were set up was, if only a little, annoying. I'm sure you indented but for some reason it doesn't allow you to do that. I think it is stupid but that is how things are so we must deal with them. A few grammar mistakes but they were easy to look past. No spelling from what I could tell. All in all a very nicely written story. I was happy when I had seen that there was at least one. Though there should be more but what the hell, not very many people could do the pair or the movie justice. A bunch of teenagers... Pfft. You've done an excellent job so there is no worries. Well, I hope that I see more of your work in the future and the best of luck to you.