rate_review Reviews

oh my god! that was.......incredible.......i think you should definately continue this story.......no, not just because you seem to be the only pne to write a will/jake story......but because this story was incredibly well written.......and........gods.........at the beginning i was actually crying......i swear, i was like 'oh no! poor jake....he wants his brother so hardcore, but stupid will just doesn't see it!' and then will came in and he said those things.......and then they had sex.......and will actually /did/ care......and.......and......ugh! it was great!........also, i love the way you ended it with something funny "Jake had a brief flash of doubt regarding if that was innuendo or not..." <--seriously, i was glad for the giggle that that induced in me........i mean, you had everything in that (hopefully not) one-shot......i cried, got mad, said 'awww', had to take a cold shower *grin/wink*, and then laughed.......seriously, great job, and i hope that you continue this story.........and even if you don't, you should write more grimmcest stories........i mean, the flow of your writing and the wording that you use goes with the movie/time period, and is simply.......beautiful.......seriously, it wasn't like some poorly-written smut-fest.....it had depth and beauty.........i really enjoyed it....soooooo.........until next time! *huggles* ja ne and love as thou wilt!

seriously, i was glad for the giggle that that induced in me........i mean, you had everything in that (hopefully not) one-shot......i cried, got mad, said 'awww', had to take a cold shower *grin/wink*, and then laughed.......seriously, great job, and i hope that you continue this story.........and even if you don't, you should write more grimmcest stories........i mean, the flow of your writing and the wording that you use goes with the movie/time period, and is simply.......beautiful.......seriously, it wasn't like some poorly-written smut-fest.....it had depth and beauty.........i really enjoyed it....soooooo.........until next time! *huggles* ja ne and love as thou wilt!

WOW. That was really sweet. I think that this one was fine on its own, but could definately have a sequel with no danger to your original plot at all. Great story, btw! Please keep writing!

Oh My God!!! I've been waiting so long for someone to do something with these two. And that was Hot!! Keep going! I think its so much sexier when theres actual love behind the screwing. :)