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December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful - only wonderful!
Like the story so much!
Hope for more - and soon...
thx for that ;O)
Like the story so much!
Hope for more - and soon...
thx for that ;O)
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December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love that Lass, just a fireball of energy. Did I just think that? Not out loud I hope.
Haha. This thought was very in character with Jack. Kudos!
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December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Did I say I like jealous Jack? Well, I do. But he can't sail away without Elisabeth! That's not right!!! I loved it when Jack admitted his love fir Lizzie. That was sweet. :)
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December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story. I've read your other stories, too and they are good. But this one is the best. I like the way you describe Jack's thought, it's totally him. And I love the way you show Lizzie, too. They are both in character. I hope Jack will soon see that Elisabeth is waering Will's chain with the engagement ring. Me likes jealous Jack!
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December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's really great, update soon!
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December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
off to a good start! I will patiently wait for more.
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December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Giddy, excited Jack - TO CUTE! He's really in love. Great start and can't wait to read more!
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December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it, I love the thoughts it's so totally Jack. And, if I may be so bold? I think you need a beta, luv, and I attached my e-mail address, if you ever wanted your writing looked over for spelling, punctuation and grammar mistakes. Please take no offence, and I can't wait for the new chapter! You better update soon!