rate_review Reviews

This story is bombin'. . . It's fantastic, you milady are god, seriously this fan fiction is the best fan fiction I've ever read, it was so funny when Jack had to eat at the kiddy table. Good job, Katie.

This is a great chapter. I love it. It's pure pagic between those two and it really came out in this chapter, they were so sweet and tentative toward one another and they weren't sure how to fix all the broken things. . . . I can't wait for the next chapter.

Beautiful and moving as always. It's so passionate and so well thought out, honestly. . . This story is like crack to me, it really is. I love you characters and their interactiosn and how everyone who was already painted in the movie stays in character in your story. Best fan fiction ever? I think so.

I'm hardcore in love with you right now. I can't believe I'm the only one that's reviewed, it's really sad that people only want to read slash on here, because this story blows and boy/boy sitches out of the water, m'dear. It just keeps getting better and better.

Although, smoking *was* allowed in the Mercer house, as seen in the scene where Jack rolls and smokes a cigarette in his bedroom after the funeral.

Stirring. . . I can barely manage words. It's so beautiful and so tragic. I'd be far more pissed if I were Mercy and she were my sister, but damn does she want to protect her. I love this story.

Beautiful tale, Lovely. I have to say this is absolutely one of the best fan fictions that I have ever read for this catagory. . . Especially for this site. Your character is well developed and likeable, without being too perfect or Mary-sueish. I'm extatic to read more, darling. Truly, truly.