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October 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
i love this story! i love how all the characters interact with each other. it definitely is not a finished story though! could you please finish it??? i need to know what happens!
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March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i hope you post more soon. i really enjoyed the tale so far.
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December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I actually really like this so far. They all sound really yummy can't wait to see what happens. I only have one complaint is the ex-lax lol. It doesn't work THAT fast it takes quite awhile for it to work. Also there is nothing I want to think of less than a bunch of hotties running to take craps. It was wicked funny but so not an image I want if the next images are going to be romantic, know what I mean lol. Anyway great job keep it up.
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December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update this story soon... I have been waiting a long time for this.
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August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i hope more people review i love this story
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July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey hey its me again. I love this story I really just can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon. Catch ya later
LL
P.S. Had to sign in under a new name but its me LL
LL
P.S. Had to sign in under a new name but its me LL
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June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the story the plot is promising. cant wait to read more.
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June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. Thanks to you I might actually finish the story.
I loved both of these chapters. I want to ask something though. Does Sarah really feel some kind of attraction to Jareth, and if she does what kind? I want to ride you hard and throw you away wet, or I want to have children with your eyes and my mouth?
LOL.
Can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon
Catch ya
LL
I loved both of these chapters. I want to ask something though. Does Sarah really feel some kind of attraction to Jareth, and if she does what kind? I want to ride you hard and throw you away wet, or I want to have children with your eyes and my mouth?
LOL.
Can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon
Catch ya
LL
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June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think this is an awsome sotry right steph :P he he its jenny muh hahahahahaha. bunny says hi and so does the revived monkey. they approve of the story as well. i hope the story gets updated it's really good so far i cant wait to see what happens next. keep up the great work.
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June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I seriously hope that your not serious about that no more story thing. Not a single person as review my story and I'm hell bent on adding more. I loved this chapter (though I really hope we see Jareth and Sarah soon) I can't wait to read more, please tell me there will be more.
Catch later
LL
Catch later
LL