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for Triple Trouble

by jenny

person bailey
schedule October 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
i love this story! i love how all the characters interact with each other. it definitely is not a finished story though! could you please finish it??? i need to know what happens!
schedule March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i hope you post more soon. i really enjoyed the tale so far.
person Amaris
schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I actually really like this so far. They all sound really yummy can't wait to see what happens. I only have one complaint is the ex-lax lol. It doesn't work THAT fast it takes quite awhile for it to work. Also there is nothing I want to think of less than a bunch of hotties running to take craps. It was wicked funny but so not an image I want if the next images are going to be romantic, know what I mean lol. Anyway great job keep it up.
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update this story soon... I have been waiting a long time for this.
person jenny
schedule August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i hope more people review i love this story
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey hey its me again. I love this story I really just can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon. Catch ya later

LL
P.S. Had to sign in under a new name but its me LL
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the story the plot is promising. cant wait to read more.
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. Thanks to you I might actually finish the story.

I loved both of these chapters. I want to ask something though. Does Sarah really feel some kind of attraction to Jareth, and if she does what kind? I want to ride you hard and throw you away wet, or I want to have children with your eyes and my mouth?

LOL.
Can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon
Catch ya
LL
person jenny
schedule June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think this is an awsome sotry right steph :P he he its jenny muh hahahahahaha. bunny says hi and so does the revived monkey. they approve of the story as well. i hope the story gets updated it's really good so far i cant wait to see what happens next. keep up the great work.
schedule June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I seriously hope that your not serious about that no more story thing. Not a single person as review my story and I'm hell bent on adding more. I loved this chapter (though I really hope we see Jareth and Sarah soon) I can't wait to read more, please tell me there will be more.

Catch later
LL