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for The Tolling of the Bell

by Pilgrim

person Kimmie
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg ive only just been able to get to read your story. *sigh* ive been so busy.

Anyway GO ORIA!!!! kick Jack off the ship! love it. She has such an attitude but you just have to love it!

Yay only 3 days till update!!!!!

Kimmie
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person Kimmie
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What do you mean apologise???!!!!! Why are you apologising!? you shouldn't be!!!!! nooooooo something bads gonna happen.

Funny story though? I was lying on my bed trying to have a nap (coz i started work at 6am) and then i suddenly realised "omg yesterday was Friday!" My nap has completely gone now coz i wanted to read this but it is totally worth it!

Kimmie
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person Kimmie
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg! I was late for work this morning coz i wanted to read this. lol. Yay Oria's back on the Pearl! Yay for everything!!!! YAY!

Kimmie
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person Kimmie
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooooh i wanna know what her plans are!!! eeeeeeh! im so excited to see what goes on! aaaah!

Kimmie
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person Kimmie
schedule August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaahhh yay Oria's back!!!! :D Im so happy now!

24th is too far away!!! Its a whole 6 days away!!!! 6 DAYS!!!! how can you expect me to wait that long!!! lol

Oh im so looking forward to it though!

Yay!

Kimmie
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person Kimmie
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg. i can actually not speak. I missed three chapters!! I cant believe i totally forgot to come on! Im so excited for whats to come though. Cant wait for Jack and Oria to reunite again (they'd better *shakes fist* kidding i wont hurt you). And whats happening with Beckett????!!!!!! omg squee this story is great cant wait for the update!!!

Kimmie

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person Kimmie
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh i came on here tocheck the latest chapter and there were 3!! I knew i had missed a week but then when there were three i freaked! its all good now though. eagerly waiting for August 3rd.

I cant wait to see what happens next! i want Oria back! lol gotta love her she is awesome....and so are you. you are the one who created her so you are brilliant!

Kimmie
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person Kimmie
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok two things. You dont have to call me Lady Linwe. My Real name is Kimberley but people call me Kimmie. Also thanks for making me cry! That chapter was so sad! It was also too short! I need to know what happens!!!! I cant wait till next week!!! Ill die! I have a theory though so i will try and make myself believe its true then i wont be too upset. Make my theory right!
person Michelle
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Two lovely chapters as usual. You had me at the edge of my seat as I was reading the battle between Norrington and Oria. It was a totally new experience for her not having the ability to heal and nerve racking for me because I'm use to her kicking butt with ease and not having to worry she was going to die. Oh no!!! Oria can die!!!! Where the $&^%& is Jack???? He has to save her!!! I'm so glad an update will be on friday because I cannot wait to see what will happen next.
person Kimmie
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG I am absolutely loving this! Im so glad you continued on with Jack and Oria. I love her character. I dont remember if i reviewed the last stories but if i didnt then i feel ashamed that i havent. I know its probably unlikely but please dont kill Oria! I couldnt bear it if she died.

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!!!