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Chapter two....I liked that things were getting back to normal with pirating on the open sea. It was very funny how Jack and Gibbs reacted to the loot after the raid. I know it can't be helped, it's the pirate in them. lol It was also cute when Jack kept a watchful eye on Oria, as if she can't take care of herself, yeah right! But very sweet. He's got it bad for her!!! But the best part. I think anyway, was the last sentence when Jack finally came around to Oria's earlier comment,"What cabin boy?" I loved it. hee hee You go Oria!! Someone needs to keep him in line. :P Twists and turns coming up in future chapters.....bring it on, I'm ready. :)

WOW!!! First of all yay for another story with Oria and Jack and *Fans face to cool down* what a beginning!!! I'm so happy to see Jack and Oria together and so happy. Oria deserves to be happy and what better way than to be with Jack!!! Nice job and looking forward to the next chaper. :)