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schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yo, cliffhanger again! ^_^ This part of the tale rocketed along even better than #1, it had a 'movie' quality to the scenes and the drama, which was great for reading. Plenty of humour too, in amongst the tension and storytelling. Jack was great in this! sexy and witty and sly *lol* and there was much more of his bond with Celeste. I still like Davy Jones a lot, love his larger-than-life character. Will got a better role to play, as one of the main movers in the tale, and a reputation as a sea captain. Loved it - off to read #3 as soon as possible! Have *got* to know what happens!!!! Thanks for sharing with us! ^____^
person Extraho
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damn, i dont want jack to die!!!!!!!!!
person akume
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great ending. I'm off to read your next one.
person akume
schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah mate, Calypso is like really freaking me out. ~shudders~ Anyway, keep them coming. Your chapters are very entertaining to read.
person akume
schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No Jack. Don't die. Need more. Please.
person akume
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Now this what I'm talking about. Suspense, action, drama, and romance all rolled up into one.
person akume
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's going to be okay Jack. I'm here for you. ~hugs a plushie of Jack~
person akume
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! So didn't see that coming. You've certainly have me at the end of my seat mate.
person akume
schedule June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Never thought I'd read a story where Barbossa actually missed having Jack Sparrow around. Again, excellent chapters. I can't wait for the next ones.
person akume
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More please. ~jumps up and down~