rate_review Reviews

i love this story!! i cant wait for more

I find it too bad that there is so little interest (or at least reviews) for this story, as I do find it pretty good. I read it all in one go now, and I'd still love to read more. Unfortunately people review rarely on adultfanfiction.net, you might get more on Fanfiction.net, but even then...
Anyway, I liked the idea of Jack being a wizard, and the original character was pretty good too. If possible, I'd like to see a bit more of Jack using magic ^_^" But I suppose I will see if you would still like to continue this story; and I hope so anyway. Annoyingly there isn't such a update-notifying system here, I think... oh well, will have to check on the pages then.
Well, good luck on further writing.

We like it!! and by we I mean my boyfriend and I! *^^* You should keep updating if only for us! Normally we're slashers but Jack and Bella's interactions are fascinating! I love what you've done with Bella's character!! We can't wait for the next update!!

<3Punki&Nkundra

Oh please keep writing this!
I've only just found it today and i think it's wonderful. I'm so engrossed. Especially to see a different, more loving side of Bellatrix. I want to see how it ends. please, please, please write more.
Thanks
Madmaz