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February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is beautiful :) i would love to see a continuation of this
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December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far. Please continue.
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September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOO, I'm SO drawn in already! Must read more! I have to say that I'm rather impressed. You have really good spelling and grammer skills. I find it so annoying to have to fish a good story out of a pile of rubbish. Thankfully your story is impecable so far.
Kudos,
Neku ^_^
Kudos,
Neku ^_^
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September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nicely written and a nice touch on the plot. Please do write more, it's so nice to see such literate fiction on here!
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August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If his parents died when he was still "quite young" then how does he have a 9 yr old brother born after Sarah visited? As I recall Jareth looked quite old in the movie. Forgive me for the nitpicking. Perhaps you meant to make Jareth younger. I do enjoy your story so far.
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August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like what I see so far. . . please please please update soon
Catch ya later
LL
Catch ya later
LL