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August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was great good job i loved it
*Liz*
*Liz*
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September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaaaawwwwww that was sooooo cheezy! ♥ it!
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August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked the whole choose between deal. made it quite interesting. Your writing style however is a little on the youth side. i know the origanals are probably writen it that very same form (not saying they are because i havent read them) Keep writing your work should naturaly broaden and mature as you write more and more. sorry if i sound harsh i've never been very good at expressing my honest critism of someones work. just want to lend a helping though.
KCK-Lumcer
KCK-Lumcer
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January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh this was awesome. I loved your portrayal of every one in your story. You all most had me crying at some points.
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December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
One of the best stories Ive read in a long time! I was so into it the entire time very good job, you're a great writer!
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November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
a new twist to the fairytail ending i love it and by sequal do you mean another story fantaboulsly written and maybe even some more tryan smut... count me in.
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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! It's over??? A sequel is a must. A MUST I TELL YOU! LOVE THE ENDING. IT WAS SPECTACULAR. A bit short though. Also, don't use the world Honestly that much when writing. It gets old. But Overall, GREAT STORY. AGAIN. WAITING FOR A SEQUEL.
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November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nooo! You can't end the story! Please! Lol I've enjoyed this sooo much! Please write a sequel soon!
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November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG. THIS IS AMAZING! I SWEAR! I haven't read something like this in so... long. You are truly amazing. I really hope you keep on going with this story. It's absolutely amazing. =]]
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November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Darn knew gabby had some fight in her, Great chapter but i hope ryan whipes the floor with gabby