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for Enter the Yautja

by sagikamikazi

person Peya Luna
schedule December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
don´t worry, i´m still alive, but right now knee-deep in christmas preparations...it will be a few days until i´ll have time to read your new story, but i´m really looking forward to it! and by the way, i really liked the heart-ripping + eating part! seems i´m a BIT crazy myself ;-)>
MERRY CHRISTMAS EVERYONE!!!
person Anon
schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I finally got a chance to sit down a read all the chapters, and loved them all. Even read the story again just to make sure I didn't miss anything. I hope to see more of this in the future.

Ar'Shiya The Death Warrior
(More Violence Please)
person chancelor22
schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well!! That was a little unexpected. But interesting. From your email I had thought this was going to be the last chapter. But there's no possible way it can be. So, having said that, I look forward to seeing what happens next.
person Shyann
schedule December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kweeeel..No I don't mind infact I'm honored.
This is fantastic can't wait to see what happeds next.
person Peya Luna
schedule December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You honestly ask my permission to use my name in one of your great storys?! Sure you can!! geez, i´m feeling so flattered i´m almost floating over the ground LOLOL so, as long as you don´t make "me" a cowardly slut, i´m looking forward to read "my" adventures - and thanks for the best prematurely christmas present ever!!
oh, and i liked this chapter very much, especially that bad blood episode in combination with the warning dreams, it promises trouble for the future!! Yay!
person aquamum
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi

I've just finished all chapters posted so far (to 15) and had to let you know I love your story.

Your spelling and grammar have improved alot - well done.

I like your style of writing and your characters - bring on more HMS.
person chancelor22
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Seems that things are moving right along. Keep up the good work. I can't wait to see what happens next... =D
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love the story! who will she end up with? all three? and maybe you should throw in some competition, make it more exciting! like enter a bad guy who wants to have her, though the lord and his brothers will object ;) and maybe kill him? hugs!
person Peya Luna
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
poor girl! i wonder how many brothers/friends he has LOLOL maybe garag is one of them, she seemed to like him - and he her too. one thing irritates me: you said she needs to get pregnant the first month after transformation, but now she is already more than a month yautja... but you will make her get pregnant, right?!
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love this story! keep it going! =) I hope she will be alright with that big fella ;P