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December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE! lol. This is going to be a great story, I know it so please update, I can't wait to see what happens next. The girls sound awesome and I can't wait to see how the predators respond to them.
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December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a weird glitch in the system...that above review is supposed to be from me, not Anon. I don't know how that happened.
Anways, can't wait until your next chapter!!
Anways, can't wait until your next chapter!!
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December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
There is going to be more of this, Right? (PPPPLLLLEEEEAAAASSSSEEEE!!!!!!!!!!) because I have run out of stories to read,
Ar'Shiya
Ar'Shiya
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December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*looks around* Me? You left a message for me at The Hunted? While I know of that site, that's not one of the ones I frequent. And I'm glad to hear that your story will be new and exciting. Can't wait to see more of it! =)
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December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I DO!
There used to be a story here, written by a friend of mine that was about preds coming to earth to hunt the xenos. They landed and went into a village and went through all kinds of ceremonies and the elder took a liking to one of the 'chosen ones' (the ones that would sacrifice themselves to the face huggers). And so, having read that one, seeing another fic with a similar title provoked memories of the other story.
However, I did say that I was waiting to see what you were going to do with the story. I have been pleasantly surprised in the past. But for me, it was just natural that after reading the first chapter, I thought that the story line would go something like: Preds land, find females, sex, preds leave/or main character dies. Or something along those lines. Which is why I said that I wanted to see something different. I was not trying to be mean or rude. I just read A LOT of predator fanfiction, and so I have seen quite a bit of the same old thing.
By the way...if you are 18+, then feel free to contact me. I do hang out on a predator forum. I am not allowed to give out the address publicly.
Looking forward to see future writings! =D
There used to be a story here, written by a friend of mine that was about preds coming to earth to hunt the xenos. They landed and went into a village and went through all kinds of ceremonies and the elder took a liking to one of the 'chosen ones' (the ones that would sacrifice themselves to the face huggers). And so, having read that one, seeing another fic with a similar title provoked memories of the other story.
However, I did say that I was waiting to see what you were going to do with the story. I have been pleasantly surprised in the past. But for me, it was just natural that after reading the first chapter, I thought that the story line would go something like: Preds land, find females, sex, preds leave/or main character dies. Or something along those lines. Which is why I said that I wanted to see something different. I was not trying to be mean or rude. I just read A LOT of predator fanfiction, and so I have seen quite a bit of the same old thing.
By the way...if you are 18+, then feel free to contact me. I do hang out on a predator forum. I am not allowed to give out the address publicly.
Looking forward to see future writings! =D
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, it looks interesting. And even though this particular story line is somewhat predictable, I am hoping that you prove me wrong. =)
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lov'in it can't wait for more.