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for Risk

by ruleroftravels

person GellyBelly
schedule February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is interesting so far.
person GellyBelly
schedule February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You better update soon man!!
PLEASE!!!
person MaxG
schedule November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I emailed you privately at your hotmail but wanted to say something here too. It's the first time I've even seen a John McClane story, and now I'm hooked and will have to come back for updates!
schedule September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting can't wait to read more
person qualle
schedule March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hmmm ... still like the story and I wand more.
Don't know. Maybe during one of the most torbulent moments. You know, like hoping he wouldn't notice or just forget in all the excitement. So Matt would get it of his chest and McClane has the choice. Or not, not sure it would work.
person aewnaur
schedule February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my god and then to just leave us there.. please please.. continue there is so very very little matt/john and i so want more moremore.. sigh.. okay just pleae.. write more
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*raises hand* i agree wit the reviewer above! (or is it below?) who cares at this point all i know is i wanna another chapter! could you PLEASE upload another chappy?!?
person qualle
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
do I like it? YES!!!
Would I want more? YES!!!
Could I write the next chapter?
No, because i'm as imaginativ as a stone, sorry.
But I would really love to read more, so could you write the story if noone is found to complete it, please, pretty please?