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Hey everyone! I'm Jay currently writing a new chapter to my story, updating and all.


Review the story! Tell my how you feel about it, I want to know that the readers are interested or not.


Don't be afraid to tell me my flaws, I want to know my weaknesses, and strong points. I'm okay to take critizisim.


Also don't worry their's a lot more to come with this story, this is only just the beginning.


So show the love, hate, anything.


Thanks for reading!



-Jay :)