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by imera

schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yes. a update. LOL. love it.
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying this one. You've got a few spelling problems, but all in all, this is very good. Keep up the good work.
schedule March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOOT! You wrote more! Im glad! this story has major potential to totally rule!
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG> i love it.
schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I will really like it if you continue. it was great. i love how both of them was getting so emotional because of the hug.
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the way this is starting out! Its tentative and slow....Just the way I like it! Please say there will be more!