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by Cassander

person Jachy
schedule April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, I liked it. I always think it's adorable when Alexander is vulnerable and unsure of himself. Good job! =)
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good story.
I like the way you descrive Alexander and his insecurity. I hope I can read something else of yours soon.
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nicely written. I loved the feeling Ale has of not being worthy enough to be in the temple of Phai. The lovemaking was passionate and tender, and I look forward to reading more from you.