schedule
February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2:
Ok, #1 reason this can't work:
Jack would have been recursed as well. So he definitally would have realized by now something was up.
Ok, #1 reason this can't work:
Jack would have been recursed as well. So he definitally would have realized by now something was up.
schedule
July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I want Slash! Hot sweety Slash! So where in the seven hells is the next chapter!!!!!!
*cools down and reads what she wrote*
Gods, now the authers going to take longer just to piss me off.
*cools down and reads what she wrote*
Gods, now the authers going to take longer just to piss me off.
schedule
July 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I don't really like slash fanfiction, but I've made a bit of an acseption for your story, And so far, I have to say.................I kind of like it. I read all 5 chapters today. It's petty good.
post more soon
post more soon
schedule
July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
you have the spell checker on auto matic in the menu bar. Go to tools, proofread, and off. Hope that helps, I have word perfect, but I figure they're both just as annoying. More slashy goodness please?lemony slashy goodness please? *shameless begging*
schedule
July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AMAZING, I ABSOLUTELY ADORE THIS FAN-FIC!!!!
You a WONDERFUL writer & i wanna thank you 4 posting
this so we can all take part in this pleasureable story,
I expected Elizabeth to do that too, she isnt much 4 a
pirate life. More of a stay at home girl...
Well,
Off to bed...
may the sweetest of dreams haunt you!
Jade
You a WONDERFUL writer & i wanna thank you 4 posting
this so we can all take part in this pleasureable story,
I expected Elizabeth to do that too, she isnt much 4 a
pirate life. More of a stay at home girl...
Well,
Off to bed...
may the sweetest of dreams haunt you!
Jade
schedule
July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to drop a line and say I love your writing style and your angry version of anamaria who's slap happy. Ity suits the very essence of who she is, a pirate that wont take crap from ANY man, especially her captain.
Cheers
Nita~
Cheers
Nita~
schedule
July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Theirs one thing I want to point out to you, when Jack decided that he wasnt going to take any of the oil with him, I found that to be very unlike him. Jack strikes me as the kind that will take what he can if he cant have all of it.
schedule
July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I agree with you, Elizabeth would eventually react that way. One not use to hard work will someday fight against it and just want to laze about. Well done on keeping Jack and Will in character. Write more or die. I want to see what happens.
schedule
July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Interesting idea. A couple of loops here and there. Quickly with the slash now, quickly!!!
schedule
July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
good so far. but ya know, you should have had elizabeth end up with anamarie. your fic is the first that I got much of a feel for the 2 of them, but a little female bonding and showing elizabeth how to be a female pirate... plus it would make a good subplot to the jack/will stuff. just a thought :)