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for Freedom's Slave

by Aithilin

person ShadowSpirit
schedule August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Shortness doesn't bother me 'cause I know your style of updating. I like Jack ^^ Ah....but then again I always like Jack....he's so cute for a pirate ^^ Well maybe cute isn't the word but...ok, yet it is the word. I hope Ana learns to trust Jack...same with Will and hopefully Jack doesn't do anything stupid to make it so that doesn't happen -___-;;
person Pookie
schedule August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think you enjoy making us suffer :p

but at least you update fast!

we'll find out more about how Ana and Will met, yes? and about the scars Will has? Well, he is a slave.. so the scars make sense, but I still wanna know more!

update soon please!
person Christine C
schedule August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Huzzah!! the AU you mentioned!!

glad to see it!

and *sigh* who doesn't love a good slave ficcie? although the "slave" part ended rather quickly. . .

I eagerly await more ^_^
person Sandrine Black
schedule August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
^_^ Ooo, very good chapter. Much likey. I really like how you have Will have scars on his back. *grins* Can't wait to hear more about them *grins some more*. Hehehe. I also really like how you have Ana in this story too, and how you put her in. She's all Will protective. Cute! /Definitely/ can't wati for more. Keep up the FANTASTIC work, like usual!!

^_^ LOVE this fic so far!!!!!
person SwordsNSparrow
schedule August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Praise!

I just wanted to say that I really liked the fiction and I hope you write more chapters. I like how the characterization went and the plotline was really good as well.

Also, I wanted to personally thank you for reviewing the fiction I wrote. You're the only person who actually did and that means a lot to me. So keep up the good work! You have talent.

- Tony.
schedule August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE iteaseease write more soon!

It never really registered with me that it was Anamaria, but I'm glad she's in here and being a mother hen to Will! Hee, hee. ^__^ I HAVE to go back and reread it now. PLEASE hurry up with the next chapter. I want to see Jack banter with Will and Anamaria!

^_~GN
person Datiye
schedule August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay! It's here, it's here! Wow, I can't beleive you posted this already. I thought you would need at least two or three days to start. Well, I love it so far. And you made Anamaria a slave with Will! Ya know, you are just the greatest. I have never seen an author who is so good to their readers. You just totally rock. Well, I'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter. Good luck! Byes!
person ShadowSpirit
schedule August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
^^ Kweee ^^ You got that up quicker than I though you would, glad you did though ^^ Nice start and spiffy that Anamaria is the other slave - I wasn't expecting that. I would have expected Eliz, but you said she probably won't be in it much and if she was a slave I'd probably cry XD Kwee, can't wait for the next chapter ^^
person SwordsNSparrow
schedule August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It was really good! I liked it, so keep up the good work. You're doing a great job, and the story's interesting. I can't wait for the next chapter. :)
person Jadefire
schedule August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like your story, please continue soon :)