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YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NICOLE GET"S A CAMEO!

.........can I get one as a smarmy wench Anita who slaps jack? And if any one asks why, i get to say, "Every one else is doing it" and shrug. Can I pretty please? if not in this fic, another one?

-snickers- Sweet strawberry line!

I love the kindness you showed the slavers. The kindness Jack showed. Me, i would have made a promise not to kill those men no matter what, savvy?

Now, what I find best, is how you made Gibbs the new Anamaria. Anamaria is an important character in this fic, and Gibbs has become the small yet equally important role in the fics.

Suggestions:

more parrot.


War, Love, and Piracy!
Nita!

To Nicole:

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Have some harpy knives -passes them in a well wrapped parcel-

Oh,and some pretty daggers, you know, just to discouradge flamers.

Question- whats your favorite torture method Nicole?

War, Love, and Piracy
Nita!

Good chapter. I can tell that your characters are getting more accurate. ::Shakes head:: Anamaria has slapped Jack. Poor Jack, but that was one of the funniest parts of the movie. Is the Pirates of the Carribean soundtrack any good?

Yay! First kisses! I love first kisses. Esspecially sweet somewhat or wholly innocent first kisses. And thats just what you did! You are so the best. Your still my favorite. And I see revenge coming up. I've been waiting for the revenge ( especially since you said it was coming ) I can tell it's gonna be good. I cant wait! Well, I'm short on time so I got to go. Good Luck and Happy Writing!

Ah, nothing like sweet revenge on horrible slavers. Yay for the ggod guys. I hope Will and Jack can work out whatever they have to work owhatwhatever that is ). A tavern? Really? Thats so cool. I always wanted to own a bar in real life ( still hope to) Ya see, this is why you are the greatest. Still number 1! Good Luck and Happy Writing!

you're briliant. i love your story and all i can say is that i hop to see the next chappie soon. Otherwise, thumbs up!

Good. I like it. Mostly IC, and what isn't is forgivable. The romance felt just a little rushed to me, but not so much that it's a probably. One suggestion - in the movie, Jack only uses the word "savvy" when he's being a smart-ass. I would avoid using in what is supposed to ten tender moment. But otherwise, good. Keep up the good work.

Good. I like it. Mostly IC, and what isn't is forgivable. The romance felt just a little rushed to me, but not so much that it's a probably. One suggestion - in the movie, Jack only uses the word "savvy" when he's being a smart-ass. I would avoid using in what is supposed to be a tender moment. But otherwise, good. Keep up the good work.

.......... My review went to hell! Damn it! Now I can't remember what I wrote...... u.u Oh well, sorry that my review(s) made you angry and stuff. It's not that I read the fics because of the slash, 'cause there are thousands of stories without slash (not even a relationship) and I like them a lot. Just wanted to make that clear.

Good Chap. btw-

C-ya

Hey sweetie!!!!!

What do you mean your not sure if you want to hug me or hit me? After all of the torture that you have put me through!!!! :-) I mean I am stuck on chocolate now for hea sak sake! *mmmm yummy chocolate* ;-)

I loved it. I was wondering how you were going to get Ana to talk to Jack. Though I should have figured you would get Gibbs to give Ana permission to hit him! :-) Aha the action for the reaction. You realize you had me thinking a hundred different things. *sighs* You do that just to torment me don't you? *glares* Grrrr Just when I was having a happy moment you had to bring Barbossa into it didn't you. Such a sweet Jack. This is how I pictured him to be with someone that he does love. It's about time. Please let Ana make a mess of those slavers!!! Jack too!!!

Hugs and happy readers,
Nicole

Hey Nita!!!! I would go with the small daggers! More fun that way!!!!! ;-)