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for Freedom's Slave

by Aithilin

person hellsangel25
schedule August 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
yay, i'm glad jack and will have finally gotten together. Now remeber you promised that ana would blow up, lol. anyways i love the story and hope the next update isn't too far off. though i understand that school can make it harder to find time. so byes
love hellsangel25
person Earen
schedule August 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am gone for like a week and this is I
gI
get of this? Bloody cheap man. Better hurry
cause I'm disturbing my roomie by being
up at all hours. So hurry with more! Next time
I get to be on, you have to have more!
*stabs some one with something blunt*

Earen
person MadoushiClef
schedule August 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmmmm.... Wrtie longer chapters. Man, the last few updates have been really short.

Your writing is fabulous, as always. Jack is being... very patient with Will. VERY patient. But sometimes I think it's more for Anamaria's sake. Wow, she can stay angry long. But she's got just cause. (Jack does want to sleep with Will.) I wonder what trouble they'll be getting up to in jolly ol'e London, ne?

Want more. Write faster. Borrow my comp if you have to. Oh yeah, and when do we get to the slash?

~Clef
person Kary_Asakura
schedule August 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Weeeeeeeeee! haha, sorry for that imprudent question. I don't mind, really (yeah riiiiiight I'm saaaaaaaaaad!) But, they say that you have to wait for things to get good! Nice chappie, tough short. Update soon!
person nita
schedule August 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
im hurt. Truly. Honestly. Depletly. How dare you say I'm not a pirate.

-sniffles-

Have you forgotten i wrote the pirates code?

-sniffles-

I just get over a horrible flu and here you are, insulting me heritage.

-sniffles-

Cute darling chappie but still.... you've hurt me. Deeply....

-sniffles-

War, Sniffles, and piracy
nita-sniffle-!
person Nita
schedule August 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Lovely to meet you Nicole, it'll be a pleasure sharing Favorite Reviewer spot in our beloved writers heart. Plus, we get to attack flamers and get TONS of pirate lollies. Everyone else get's one. We get more than one when we review. Except for me, i have hundreds because i fight off flamers and advertise her fics in odd places. This'll be fun. You prefer shot guns, or small daggers Nicole?

Neets
person Datiye
schedule August 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Don't worry about shortness. It was a great chapter. I love anything that gives a little bit of history. Great job, Keep going. Good Luck and Happy Writing!
person Sparx
schedule August 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter =) And I missed the update on the last one, and I liked it as well. I like the bond you have between Will and ariaaria, it's very interesting and a unique plot point. Can't wait for the next chapter.
person Nicole
schedule August 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey sweetie!!!! And Hello Nita!!!! :-) Okay you answered one question what about all of my others. Not to mention the new ones you have broght to mind!!! sigh I know you do this to us on purpose! ;-) Thanks sweetie!!

Hugs and lots of chocolate,
Nicole

P.S. I found the rope and you better believe that I will use it!!!
person Nieni Springs
schedule August 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM

.... hmmm... purty good so far! *grins*