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Amazing story.! I have only on tiny little question.... Slash.soon?¿? n.n There you have it! te ste soon

I love your story, Very creative. I'd like to read more.

Heh, that is so cute. I love how Jack is all affectionate and playful with our dear Will. Especially with the nicknames he gives him, like "Whelp." Awwww...that's just too cute. Go slashy Jack! He makes me happy. 'N Will too, since they're the obvious couple here, heh. Anyway! That was another good chapter. Keep up the excellent work! I can't wait until the next one comes out. Sorry that your html codings didn't work on your site. :(


- Tony.

Im still sick, damnit, otherwise, you'd have reviews comming out of the wazooo!


Everything is so wonderful i don't knwo where to begin, oh, and as a warning to other reviewers.

IM HER FAVORITE SO TRY AND TAKE MY PLACE AND I'LL KILL YA!

But feel free to review until your brains implode.

jack is so totally Jack without becoming an AU charcter which is very difficult soemtimes in AU's. You have such a grasp oin Will, you manage to keep him the same basic person only with a battered soul. Ya gotta loive you gift with the written word,

On the anamaria front, im kinda waita bia bit until she jumps out, savvy?

otherwise, i love EVERYTHING!

but i won't be able to get my ass back to a comp for a while.

Flu's are a bitch.

War, Love, and Piracy
nita! -coughwheeze-

*ACH* I would never hurt Will or Jack! They are much too precious to me. But thats okay. I dont need to but in on every fic ( but it was fun ) So Jack does get revenge! Yes! Yes! That is such a beautiful thing. THats what I really want to see. W I' I'm short on time so, reveiw over. Sorry. Well, Good luck and Happy writing!

You are a great writer, stop say that your stuff is crap, or horrible. At least you can actually finish a story. *Looks guilty and runs from rabid Tamora Pierce fanficcers* Very nice plot, keep writing so I can keep reading. I liked the kohl scene. *Psycho grins* Wondering when we'll see Barbossa, revenge is good.

OMG!!!! You like Voltaire???!!! I LOVE them! And that's one of my fav songs and I love that look Jack has in his eyes at the end too!! I'm sorry I haven't even finished your story yet but when I saw that I sqee-ed so loud I think I woke me mum! LoL! y, Iy, I just haven't seen a lot of people that like their shit and I got a little over zealous I can't wait to read more of your story but I just had to say that you rock! (excuse my fangirl ranting I'm actually not normally this teenie-boppery) But squeeee!m lim listening to When You're Evil right now!

Well at least you've updated :) SO short tho!
*dies* They're moving along so slowly, but then
all the better I guess.

Why can't have have the sharps? I really want
to help Jack :) Pwease? Ne? *licks canines*
I might jus hafta bite them instead. *grins* ovedoved the part, even tho it was so short!!! Continue on!

Earen

I loved this, I especially loved the flash back. Keep it up i can't wait!! ^_^

Gr, I feel like I'm in an army camp. Now we've started drill. Marching. For eight hours straight. In eighty-five degree weather. It's only better than the marching around in blocks we were doing. At least I don't bounce anymore while I march. Yes, I just said bounce. As much as I hate horror movies the Scream movies were just gross. They weren't really scary, but they were sick. Sympathies sent from the Black Pearl. Excellent chapter. I don't mind the shortness of it. I'm in a very strong case of writer's block at the moment, so my readers would be glad to hear anything from me. Wow, that would be so funny if you found a way to let Anamaria slap Jack just for old times sake. Ahoy maties! We're shippin' out!

Ja ne,
~Insane Pineapple from Naboo

P.S. One last note about band camp. I live in a Redneck in the middle of nowhere. Because of band camp, I have a farmer's tan so I fit right in. Now, I just need an old beat down pickup truck, and life will be good......