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i suck at writing so i read. now i hate to push but you need riterite more cause you've got me hooked to this story!
byes

Yay! New chapter! And it was kinda sweet too. Don't worry about writers block. *waves black pirate skull wand* Tada! All gone! Didn't work? Oh well, I tried. If ya need some ideas I could always add them in my reveiws. Like maybe Jack could ask Ana if she knows where any of these slavers could be so he can show his true pirate colors. Black. of of course the silver of steel. Just an idea, don't know if it would screw up your ending(s). Hey, are you reading 'You Can't Rape The Willing'? Ya should 'cause the author gave me a cameo in the fourt chapter that just made me giddy with joy. Ya should give it a look see in your spare time. It's so hilarious! But your still my fav, they're #2. You will always be #1! Anyway, great chapter ( who cares if it's short? I don't. ) Good luck and Happy writing!

Hello!
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So this is what you needed the info for! hehe....well it's a wonderful story so far, as all your stories are....looking forward to reading more. You come up with the *most* intriguing AU's!! I love it!!!....please update soon!!!

Tinnuial

HI! Oh that was good. I liked that scene where Jack was asking Will about the scars. Very cool. *grins* I like the phsycological torture too. Hehhee... *takes stick back* I didn't hit your head! ... Did I? I'm so sorry if I did, I was aiming for the writers block. I would do the same thing again, seeing how you said it was stilll kinda plaguing you. But I wn'tn't want to risk another head wound for you. Looking forward to more, keep up the /FANTASTIC/ work!!

Nai? *piku* Onegai?? *grabs at sharp things* Onegai -shimasu-?
I just want to torture the slaves a little... get some blood running
make Jack want to draw more. Ne?

Lovely chapter. I loved Jack getting info out of Will that way.
So kyute! Kawaiiiiiiii! *squeals* Mmmmm, so yeah, have some
nice Jack / Will soon? Some sweet cuddling? Kissing? WAFF?

Earen <-- bounces off singing "Torowa egao egao" as she heads over to write a fic

I liked it. Things are starting to get really good. Keep up the great work!:)

- Tony

Aw...nice work. I thought the ending was cute. Can't wait to see what happens.

- Tony.

Heh, that was really good. I'd like to see more of that great work you're producing. I love Jack/Will and think you write it really well. I like how patient and gentle Jack is with Will. 'N even the seemingly jealous Anamaria is amusing. Thank god that Mr. Gibbs is in her counter of the ring. She needs someone to distract her anger from Jack. I think he's doing a fine job as well. Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter! :)

- Tony

I'm so sorry I didn't review the last chapter in time. Band camp is a very difft cht challenge to work with when trying to read and write fanfictions. Because of it, one of my stories is about a week overdo for an update. I think I'm going to run off, taking only clothes and a laptop, and joining Jack Sparrow's crew o' the unlikley. Then, I'll come back after band camp is o'er. Apparently, it gets much better after camp. I guess after five and a half hours of marching in the hot sun while hearing shouts of "Left Lateral!" "Band, About Face!" "Mark time hut!" and "Right face, left face, left face, right face, half right face," anything sounds better really. Then comes the hours of memorized music. Sorry, I tend to ramble a lot. Great chapter. Anamaria is gonna half to trust Jack one of these days. He can steal her boy, but he can't steal her boat. I love how you show how Will puts so much trust in Jack. It shows AU in a new light.

Ja ne,
~Insane Pineapple from Naboo

*sigh*

poor Jack, feelin all guilty bout not being able to keep his promise to Bootstrap... but he is now.. kinda..

is Gibbs goina spill the beans that he knew about Will when they went to England to find Bootstraps wife?
will Ana stop freaking out about Jack spending time with Will?

how long are you goina make me wait til I know whase ise is happening?!

update soon please!