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Nice chapter! Loved when Will told Jack who hurt him and how and why. More soon, this fic is excellent! Writer's block, you say? How evil! *hiss* Surely this is all building up to something though and I can't wait to see what it is!

i remember reading in one of your summeries that jack and will would get together i just hope it's soon. then you need a sceen where ana blows up at jack cause she thinks he useing or forcing will. or since will is using his cabin even if jack isn't with will in a sexual sense yet you can still have ana blow up. anyway just some ideas cause i want the next chapter fast. you write better than me so write and don't be hard on yourself. byes

*glowers and takes her sugar back*
Mine. XP
Great great great chapter! Wow, Will and Ana having a spat?
That's just... very very very awesome! Poor kids, so *waggles
eyebrows* If Will stays in Jack's cabin, does Jack as well?
Will we get some snuggling at least? And can I cleave one
of the buggers' ears off? I wanna get at those bastards that
hurt will too! Please give bad me sharp objects! Oneg!!
!!


Earen <-- is acutally signed in today. heh.

just when I was thinking I'd have to do without one of my fic fixes!

tsk, what is up with Ana? She may not like Jack, or how he treats Will, but she should at least be nice to him... 'specially since he's the captain and could have her thrown overboard.. I always find things like that as motivation to be nice...

although I can see why she would be a bit shocked the Will spoke to her like that, so far he's seemed very mellow

and as always, I'm dying (dieing? no.. dying looks right..) to know more!!

update soon please!

Yay, new chappie! It's okay that it was short, writers block is evil. *hits writers block with stick* Shoo, SHOO! *grins* Did it leave???? I'll threaten it with an axe next time, if it didn't. Hehehe... Aww, poor Ana. Hopefully she learns soon that Jacks a good guy.

Now why would I go and challenge you to writing a happy, fluffy fic? I /love/ dark, angsty fics. So you'll get no challenges from this mouth! Speaking of dark... are we going to hear more about Will's time as a slave? Just curious... ^_^ Can't wait for another chapter, keep up the FANTASTIC work!!!

Well, Ana sure got pissy quickly! Oh, I'm sure she has her reasons, whatever they are. So, will our young Will be staying alone in the cabin at night I wonder... Hehe, I should stop have such naughty thoughts. Ana would kill me! Good luck and happy happy writing!

::Glares at the site as it wouldn't allow her review for the last chapter go through.:: Stubborn thing...

I don't think Ana will be too happy knowing Will has Jack's cabin....oi....she's as stubborn as this sit.But.But I hope she gets used to Jack in good time ^^ Though I am a bit worried for what could be thveryvery bad' ending....as long as there's a good one as you said, I'm sure people won't try to kill you XD

K'so....forgot what I was going to say... x_X Gomen...

(There's PLENTY of slash pairings in YGO XD Though I think half of the time most of the yaoi authors just find the slightest thing to go off of to make a pairing work.....ho-hum ::Goes to bed.::)

Wonderful fic, and a VERY interesting idea. That's one turn from the movie I hadn't thought of, if Norrington/Governor Swann hadn't saved Will that day of the pirate attack.

* lets out a retarted sounding giggle* That was gud. New chapter please. Soon. Or I shall have no choice but to horribly gore you with a tooth brush.

I love it!! This is a wonderful fic, and I love how you've written it. The plot is absolutely wonderful. Can't wait for more.