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Loving this, but need more, and soon.

Heh, hadn't expected to see another chapter so fast but I'm not gonna complain. Can't wait for the next one!

I love this fic! LOL. Please update soon!!!!!!!!! I love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON!
=what more can I say?
-Jess-

Stop saying stuff is crappy 'cause we think its good. An author will always think less of there own work ( which is why my stuff is in notebooks ins of of here, hehe ). But I will reassure you that none of this is crappy. I think you have Jack's form of grief and saddness right. I don't see him as the crying type either. I think he would probably get mad and seek revenge, but thats just my opinion. And I know ya said you are giving up on A/L pairings (yeah, i know, switching topics but its still orli ) so why don't you just move of to differant pairings. I would love to see more LOTR fics from you. But this fic is more important anyway. Well, like I said, great stuff, keep going and GOOD LUCK!!!!!! Hehe, have fun writing!

Yay, I liked this.Good going! Post another chapter out ASAP please! And I hope you're planning on expanding the happy ending. Happy endings are...happier. Oooh, and they make you feel all warm and gooey inside ^.^

Alright! Finally got a moment to get back to fics, I've been meaning to look for more of your stories^_^

Very cool story! I've g the thesaurus now, so I can use better adjectives in the future...

Anyhow, I like how you're quick in explaining certain aspects, explaining the histories and whatnot so as we't 't have to guess. And you even kept Will and Ana inractracter, given different backgrounds! Kudos.

^_^V

Ooo, three endings! Anything that makes the story go on longer is fine with me. :)

But that last one sounded a bit ominous.....You just LOVE messing with your readers' minds, don't you? ;)~

Don't you dare say that was a crappy chapter! It was great. And so sad, a w a way to die, looking at your friend. Well, I will be awaiting the next GREAT chapter. And my ever so popular reveiw ending, Good luck!

XD Oh this is good! But the parts are so short!
Loved the thing about Cotton at the end of 4
there! XD Awesome!

Earen

I really like it just like the rest of your stories. it's one of the better AU's i've ever read most of the time i like things that stick mostly with the original story line. i know pushing dosen't help but write more soon i can't wait to read more.
Love, angeluspoet