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*laughs* That last line was luffly. I'm really enjoying this! Woohoo!
So Will all beat up by bastards? I'll kill zem! Bwhahaha!
Anyway! Continue on, yeah?

Earen

poor Ana :(

but YAY! to Will for helping her!

and then poor Will for gettin beated :(

3 endings?! woooow... and you don't have to hide! If you hide, how will you give us more stories?

as always, update soon please!

Evil storm, delaying your update. I hate it when the power goes out... one time I didn't have internet for DAYS because the modem overheated. I almost died I tell ya! I really liked Ana's story, is Jack ever going to hear of it? Wow, three different endings you say? Impressive. The one I'm really rooting for is that happy ending one. I can't stand non-happy endings. I'll still read them though... but I don't like it as much. I'm a sucker for happy endings, what can I say? ^_^ Can't wait for more, keep up the FANTASTIC work! I'll pray for no more power outages. Hehhe.

I've been sick the last few days. -sniffles-

I'm gonna r and r when i read, Expect to get lotsa support and demands for lolli's from me, kay?

-hugs-
Neets

YAY! an update uberly fast! You don't want me to suffer! YAY!!

I like my jelly bellies... don't take them away.. I have a whole other bag... yummy jelly bellies... would you like more?

now, onto the review!!

I liked this chapter, we already had a basic idea of what happened from the first chapter, this just confirmed and elaborated on it. Poor Bill :( We will miss him.

And! we got a hint that Bill was getting ready to tell Jack about Will and Will's mom (sorry, can't remember the name you gave her) Well.. he did kinda tell him about Will's mom.. anywho.

I can't wait to find out about Ana and Will's past.. they be the ones I'm impatientlytingting for!

Update soon please!

Hrrmmm...let's see...where to begin....Well, first off, congrats. You write probably some of the best PotC slash stories that are out there IMHO. ^_^ I simply adored your 'Coming Along' fic, although I did think the writing style in that was a bit too simplistic at times. However, your style has definately improved over the course of your fics. Actually, I'm quite enjoying it in this one. Simplistic, yet still detailed enough to keep it engaging and generally well kept in character. ^_^ BTW, I like the much inclusion of the Parrot as the second main source of annoyment. (the first being Jack, of course.)

One thing I must give you major major kudos on. You write slash and you don't make Elizabeth the Bitch Queen from Hell who maliciously stands in the way of Jack and Will's destined love! Gahd. That's my major peeve when it comes to slash and I've only found one other author besides yourself who writes PotC slash and doesn't do that. Elizabeth is one of my heroes now, so yay for you for not making her Eliz-bitch. ^_^ Same goes for your treatment of Ana. Whom I also adore the way you write her character.

Umm...so, this is very long and is excessive with the smilies. Perhapes I should come up with something helpful now....Well, perhapes you could add a bit more detail to your action paragraphs? *goes out on a limb* Err...well, and I do know how you hate this but, well....keep up the good work and I look forward to future chapters and fics. ^_^

It wasn't a bad chapter! Jack nearly cried, that's worth it! XD I mean.....man... x_X I'm good at wishing angst upon characters....but I feel so bad for him....Kwee ^^ Ana and Will flashback! *-* ::Mumbles how being nocturnal really raising 'hyper' attitude or 'fic angst' attitudes.:: o.O;;

Ah.....I don't write for either of those....Just about all my fics are for Yu-Gi-Oh. Rather good show - in Japanese anyway. ::Glares and starts fires and stabs the dubbed version until nothing is left.

Hey, that was another great chapter! I liked it. Keep up the good work! ;)

- Tony.

Another brillant chapter! I love how you write Jack. The storyline keeps getting better every chapter. Keep up the great work. :)

- Tony.

Ugh... it's 830am... why am I up... ugh. Man, I can barely type. Sorry for any errors ahead of time. Oh yeah, I came back from a vicious sleep over, and was like, hmmm any new fics? Low and behold, yours was up! And as for your last comment, this WAS a good chapter. I really enjoyed reading the flashback. And I'm telling ya, I'm also really looking forward to the next flashback... I thought you mentioned one about Will and Ana... it's too early to remember. Anywho, great chapter! Can't wait for anotherone. Also, keep up the FANTASTIC work. Such a great fic I'm telling you. Off to I g I go... sorry if theres lack of coherency. wow. Big word even with sleepyness....zzzzzzzzzzzz.......