rate_review Reviews

oooooooooooooooooooooooooooh i love this story... i hope there's more... i love the fact that govener swann is plotting his son-in-laws murder... that r0x0rs soooooo much. wow.... i dunno what to say.... goooooooooood... write more.... now.... i mean.... well actually now was the right word... tee-hee...

That was really good. I love Jack/Will and even tried writing some myself. I liked how your story was written, so keep up the good work! :)

- Tony

It's almost a bit rash, and yet not so, because of (and hurrah for it) rum! Otherwise, I liiike this, in character and everything. I really think there ought to be more reviews to this, but either way, am urging you to continue! Interesting thing for Elizabeth's father to ponder (cue dramatic music and overdone scenes of fear of hellfire).

Hmmmmmmm............
Can we say WOW!
Hope to find out what Daddy dearest does to get Elizabeth out of her marrige. And if you are going to continue this please please don't let her get her hands on Jack and Will. Girls like her tend to ruin everything. I should know. I'm surprisingly a lot like Elizabeth. It's scary. Very moving, I might add. I like Jack vow. It would make anyone feel loved.

arg! don't stop there!! do continue, this story is one of only a few good PotC slashes that i can find. also, i am interested in how Govenor Swann is hoping to get Elizabeth out of her marrage.

Lor, this is a wonderful story! Beautifully written and easily transfered to a movie in the mind. I love reading your work ... keep it coming! Tab