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October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Words fail me. This was (no pun-swear)beautiful. Nice work. You really grasped the characters and nailed them to a tee.
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July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I thought this was great. Very well written to keep it sexy, but not nasty. I'd love to see you do one for if Lester hadn't stopped when Angela said she was a virgin.
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September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing, i trully believed the characters could have been thinking what you showed. So good.
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August 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awesome! write more - you capture them so well.
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June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story, well written, infact it was VERY well written. My friend says it made her very horny.
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December 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I didn't expect it to be so wondefully written. Congrats.
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October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was really beautiful. You use words that are sorrowfully underused in fiction today and Janie is very authentic. This could be pretty sappy considering the personality and word choices of Ricky but you've captured him without allowing him to become a caricature. Very well done. Will you write more or for other fandoms? You have avery nice voice.
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September 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
what an excellent story....well written, and you delve into the character of jane burnham in a very real and effective way.....you catch the essence of her character better than I did...rickey too....would love to see you write a story about angela....
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September 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like it, alot! You really kept it coherent with the movie.
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August 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey guys this is the author and I've just re-read the story and found a couple of typos so I just wa to to say sorry about that I must've missed them when I spellchecked.
Hope you enjoyed it anyway,
Love Pasque
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Hope you enjoyed it anyway,
Love Pasque
XXX