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August 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The only complaint I have for these story is the idea of Will running. I would think that he'd be more likely to try and do something stupid rather than leave Jack. Otherwise, great story. Looking forward to seeing more soon( hint, hint).
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August 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i like this story
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August 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It's still great! I still love it, and please update as soon as possible!
PLEASE!!
PLEASE!!
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August 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So that brings us all up to date, eh? I absolutely love it. Deffinately a good thing going in this. And I can't wait to see how you continue, hopefully you won't be too hard on our sweet lil blacksmith? ;-)
Very intriguing with the possibilities this brings up now, of course. And it really has the potential to develop into a really good plot. Poor Jack, you'll have him and Will together, right? Or is it more Barbossa oriented? Ai! I can't wait to read more. :D
Huggles
-Aithilin
Very intriguing with the possibilities this brings up now, of course. And it really has the potential to develop into a really good plot. Poor Jack, you'll have him and Will together, right? Or is it more Barbossa oriented? Ai! I can't wait to read more. :D
Huggles
-Aithilin
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August 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
duuude..
somehow, I was expecting a bit more time to be between when Barbossa caught them, and the whole apple thing.
and now we know why Jack ain't allowed to talk for a bit!
can't wait for more! update soon please!
somehow, I was expecting a bit more time to be between when Barbossa caught them, and the whole apple thing.
and now we know why Jack ain't allowed to talk for a bit!
can't wait for more! update soon please!
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August 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
more! please write more!
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August 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yikes!!!! doe does this follow directly after 'Barbossa's Boys'? or is this an extra addition or something along that nature? Damn band camp for keeping me away all week.
I do like the way that this part read though, very suspenseful, but me no likey the cliffie.
I do like the way that this part read though, very suspenseful, but me no likey the cliffie.
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August 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry I didn't read it earlier, I thought it was the same story, and that you were re doing it because it got deleted or something (Yes, I'm stupid) excellent chapter though, can't wait to read more!
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August 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting! Please, continue it.
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August 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Still great! Please keep going!