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December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Grat story Jack and Will are gorgeous.
What'll happen with the corset?
Please update! Waiting kills!
What'll happen with the corset?
Please update! Waiting kills!
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August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NOOOO POOCK &CK & WILL!!!! Barbossa is such a BAS!!!!!!!!!!! Seriously I've been waiting forever to find out what Jack's punishment is!!!!!!!!!YOU NEEEEEEEEEEEDS TO BE WRITING MOOOOOORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you gotta write more poor sexy Jack poor hot Will!!! Barbosa is such a bastard!!!!!!!!!!
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July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I wanted to give one review at the end of all of this (I cannot stop reaing, and have read Barbossas Boys 1 and now have been reading all the pages here.
It's brilliant!
I love it, you have a great sense of humor and write a good, fun and uhm...HOT story here!
Just one thing i didn't like... "I hate the bloody Dutch."
Me being Dutch and a Barbossa lover, that line could've been left out..but hey, since your story is so brilliant i'll forgive ye ;)
OK, i'll go rush back to the rest of the story now.
Review at the end too.
Love&greetings from Holland.
It's brilliant!
I love it, you have a great sense of humor and write a good, fun and uhm...HOT story here!
Just one thing i didn't like... "I hate the bloody Dutch."
Me being Dutch and a Barbossa lover, that line could've been left out..but hey, since your story is so brilliant i'll forgive ye ;)
OK, i'll go rush back to the rest of the story now.
Review at the end too.
Love&greetings from Holland.
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July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story!
Barbossa is so cruel though..oh well.
I hope there's a sequel coming soon.
Or is it there already?
I'm new here, but i'll try and find out.
't k't keep us in suspense too long ;)
Well done, it's really a good story.
Greetings from Holland.
Barbossa is so cruel though..oh well.
I hope there's a sequel coming soon.
Or is it there already?
I'm new here, but i'll try and find out.
't k't keep us in suspense too long ;)
Well done, it's really a good story.
Greetings from Holland.
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April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very...erm... interesting. I like it. ;-)
(okay this has to be the shortest review I've ever writen)
Keep it up!
~Iola_83
(okay this has to be the shortest review I've ever writen)
Keep it up!
~Iola_83
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(chapter 6)
Yeah! Will torture.
VERY GOOD Will torture. Please Update soon. This is too good. I want to see what's you are up to next!
Barbossa!!! I wish Will and Jack will hurt you badly!!! bery badly!!!
YYY
Yeah! Will torture.
VERY GOOD Will torture. Please Update soon. This is too good. I want to see what's you are up to next!
Barbossa!!! I wish Will and Jack will hurt you badly!!! bery badly!!!
YYY
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April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(chapter 2)
sorry I didn't sign-in. I signed in 2 times tonight already...computer keeps kicking me off, again. sob
Well. I'm still loving it!
I love how Jack is trying to save Will. That's so sweet of him!
Too bad Will didn't get away. But then again the story won't be fun if Will got away right? LOL
YYY
sorry I didn't sign-in. I signed in 2 times tonight already...computer keeps kicking me off, again. sob
Well. I'm still loving it!
I love how Jack is trying to save Will. That's so sweet of him!
Too bad Will didn't get away. But then again the story won't be fun if Will got away right? LOL
YYY
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April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(chapter 3)
Can't review.. want to jump to next chapter...Smut...smut
Must review...need to review...this fic is too good not to review
Can't review...want to read the next chapter NOW
Need to review...
Can't...
need to.
Ca
Can't.....SMUTTTTTTT!!!!!
YYY
Can't review.. want to jump to next chapter...Smut...smut
Must review...need to review...this fic is too good not to review
Can't review...want to read the next chapter NOW
Need to review...
Can't...
need to.
Ca
Can't.....SMUTTTTTTT!!!!!
YYY
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April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(chapter 4)
Can it get hotter than this? Will/Jack smut is the best!!!!
Will is so sweet and cute...so innocent!
Lovely! Just lovely!
this is on of the best PotC fic I've ever read/
YYY
Can it get hotter than this? Will/Jack smut is the best!!!!
Will is so sweet and cute...so innocent!
Lovely! Just lovely!
this is on of the best PotC fic I've ever read/
YYY