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I think you should make Will and Jack have sex and then Barbossa walk in and then have a heart attack because his lovers are cheating on him and then make Will and Jack get free and then rape the other pirates on the ship and then make Will and Jack take control of the ship and then make the ship sink and then have Will and Jack be stranded on a island and find a time machine and then make them go back to the 3rd age of the world in the year 3000 and join the Fellowship of the Ring and have Jack and Will have sex with Legolas and make Gimli be jealous and then have Legolas raped by Jack and then Jack rape Aragorn and Haldir and Galadriel and Celeborn and then make Will and Jack go forward in time to the pirate age and then make Will and Jack be boyfriend and girlfriend and then Elizabeth die because Will is Jack's girlfriend and then make Aragorn have his revenge on Jack and rape him.

I really do think I'm going to live in your story.
Such wonderful smut. Mmmmmm.
I can not wait for the Barbossa/Will. That will be nice.
And how will dear Jack feel? Heee.
And bondage... oh definitely bondage.
And how would dear Barbossa react if he found out what *his* boys up up to all without him?
Thank-you for making such a wonderful little tale. I mean. I'm going to live there. See all the action firsthand, yknow?
^_~ More soon, please and all? Or at least as soon as ye can. I understand being busy. Grr. ^_^

write faster damn it must kinow what happens... poor jack and will hehehe love your story

Great Stuff, I need more. Now! More non-con, more naked, helpless Will. What a wonderful, wonderful story!! Well Done! Jolly Good Show!

dearest goldenkingcobra, this be a story, a tall tale. We don't really believe in curses, yet we write about it, and think rape is really really bad. In stories of the supernatural, tis very important fer ye ta suspend yer disbelief, and go with the flow, so ta speak. After all, it is just fiction, isn't it. So, flaw or not, this is our literary universe, and we can do what we want. Even if that incl a r a recursed Barbossa or, gasp and giggles, Will getting pregnant with JAck's child. Here, in FanFic world, it COULD happen. So, double HAH.



I thank ye all fer yer patience, and hope ye all continue ta enjoy this Twisted Tale, from yer local, neighborhood, clonesofconfusion.

Oh yea, much find out what happens. . .ohh MO sean with Jack and Will . . .done well. More please.

AHA! I found a flaw in your story! Ye can only be curse if ye be de one to take the gold from the chest, and after Barbossa died he could not have taken a piece out. Even if the monkey handed him a piece he would not be cursed, it would still be the monkey, with the gold or not. So, HA!

O_O -statrts freakin' out- A CORSET! Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay! Jus' don't forget to let 'em /breathe/. I almost stopped breathing once...twice.....many a time. But a unconcious Jack or Will is...well it /is/ a pretty picture. hehe, but not much good smuttiness can happen while they be flop-dead! ^_^ -dances- Rah Rah! Keep writin'! -cheers- Urgh...Hate cheering. but I did anyway, jus' fer yeh. -half bow-

At first: Hahaha!
At twice: My dear, I love this fanfic!!! Although I don't understand anything, well,let's say: not much.
I'm very bad at speaking English, so I hope u can understand my review?!
An excellent Story and the pairing is - wonderful!!
Well done!!
Don't be cruel and let me wait so long for the next part (very strange sentence o.O), savvy?! *lol*
See ya, Aku-chan

oohhhhh this is getting pretty good. not to be predictable but lots more jack/will and threesome action would be good. wi just a bit more jack/babosa to keep things spicy