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for Barbossa's Boys 2

by CandyMoore

person rox
schedule September 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
me liky. me liky lots wouldn't mind a little more of the jack punishment tho. (that must sound so sad) i like the idea of them and the crew......

it could really f**k them up a bit.

great fic tho keep it commin
person Pookie
schedule September 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
"A short black corset."

uh... first.. what is that doing in the Dutch captains cabin in the first place? wait... maybe I don't wanna know..

oy, all through Jack and Will goin' at it all I could think was that Barbossa would walk in on 'em... I'm so glad he didn't! the consequences would not have been good *shakes head*

Update soon please!

person WillsBonnyLass
schedule September 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
uh-huuuu... that's great!! *hugs*
go on mates, go on... can't ait for what will follow now between jack and will... well I *know* what will happen, but want to read it in your own words black on white... *jumps in impatience*
person Sparx
schedule September 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This sounds sick but my request is for Barbossa to take Will! Mercilessly lmao. *feels tred aed and sick rofl*
person .the.Rowan
schedule September 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I feel so loved. ^_^ -hugs whips and chains and handcuffs and things-

Yeh cut me off! Write moreeeeeeeeeeeeee....I need the smuttiness....<.< >.> Hehe. Your a good writer, and keep it up with the bondage!
person Aithilin
schedule September 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh! Update! I hope you get enough reviews soon, I wanna know what happens!

I can just picture Barbossa coming in just when Jack gets started...;-) Poor Will. heehee

Love it, and will be waiting for the next part, though I'm going to re-read too...

Huggles

-Aithilin
person leann
schedule September 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow. it just keeps getting more and more interesting. keep on writing
person Akurei
schedule September 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Smut. Will and Jack smut......hopefully. Unless Barbossa catches them. Good chapter.
person Pookie
schedule September 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You finally updated! YAY!!

I've been waiting ever so patiently.. (ok, realreally..)

Barbossa confuses me... he's nice to Jack and Will if they don't fight him... but he stillw atns to hurt them... mean people make no sense

poor Will... now it makes lots more sense about why he doesn't want Barbossa to touch him..

can't wait for more! Update soon please!
person Lydia NightShade
schedule September 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHH!!!! You can't leave it there!!!! It was just getting to the yummy hot pirate fucking!!! You are evil! Bravo!!! My hat's off to you dears!! Please update again!!! I like it! I like it! I reviewed!! Please, please, please more!!!! *baby seal eyes*b