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The day I died inside

By: Bubbles4011
folder Star Wars (All) › General
Rating: Adult ++
Chapters: 5
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Disclaimer: I do not own the Star Wars movie series, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
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Chapter One

Okay so I'm makeing this a story. I hope you enjoy this. If I made any mistakes please email me to tell me them thank you

Disclaim: I don't own Star Wars, none of this is mine.

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The coldness surrounded me in my dreams. I saw innocent people dyeing, I saw houses burning and could smell the stench and decay of blood.

I saw a monster in all black, he had a helmet on. I saw the Jedi temple burring, I saw dead children littering the ground. Then he approached me, it was the monster with horns, his face was red and black. “You have the dark mark” he said staring at the black line that ran from my right eye. “NO!, PLEASE JUST GO STOP HAUNTING MY DREAMS LEAVE ME ALONE!” I yelled in horror. “Your parents…..who where they?” he asked. I fell on my knees crying, “NO!”. He laughed, “And fine Sith Lords they where”.

“NOOOOOOOOOOO!”
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It was then I woke up. I sat up drenched in cold sweat breathing hard. My black ebony hair stuck to my shoulders and face. My icy blue eyes scanned me room in the JedI temple, nothing fancy. They landed on my red light saber, I then fell back onto my bed. I Turned my face slightly to see in to my mirror. A 17 year old girl stared back at me, the black jagged line running from my right eye almost went of my face. I stared at my pale face for a few more seconds before I sighed and laid out princess style. I was almost asleep when a knock came at my door.

“Saria, get up its time for training”

My master Olivay’s voice came from behind the door.

I bolted up, “Yes master” I yelled through the door.

I got up and got into the shower. I took a 3 minute shower and washed my hair. I then got out and dressed in my usual brown padawan robe. I braided my long ebony hair , I used the force to get my lightsaber and hooked it on my belt. I grabbed my robe coat and left my room.

I met Master Olivay at the training room, she pulled out her blue lightsaber and stood in a defence position.

“Draw your saber young one”

I pulled out my lightsaber and started to spar with Olivay, I tried to go for a lower strike but Olivay blocked it. After a couple of hours we stopped.

I was all sweaty and my breathing was uneven.

“Go take a shower then come to senator Palpatines office” Olivay said.

“Yes Master” I said well bowing.

I took yet another shower that day, but instead of my padawan training outfit I put a pair of plain brown slacks and a black muscle shirt on. I brushed my hair into a pony tail and hooked my lightsaber to my magnetic belt.

I put a pair of bronze cuffs on and started to make my way to Palpatines office. When I stepped into the elevator I hadn’t noticed the two Jedi’s standing beside me Intel,

“Hello?” I turned to see two men, one was older then the other. A padawan and his master.

“Hello” I replied.

“What floor are you getting off?” the elder one asked.

“Palpatines office you?”

“Were off there too” said the younger one.

“Oh, well my master told me to go there” I said.
“You’re a padawan?” the younger asked.

I nodded, he then noticed my lightsaber.

“oh”.

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Palpatines office was big, about a dozen people where init including Yoda, Mace Windo, Palpatine, a bunch of maids, my master and Padme.

“Lady Amidala” I said bowing to her.

“Oh my lord, Saria?” she asked eyeing me like I had grown a third ear.

The older and younger Jedi turned to me then.

“My god Saria?” the elder one said.

“Yes Master Kenobi I’m surprised you hadn’t noticed me earlier” I replied.

He looked confused that I had called him ‘master Kenobi’ for a second but it past.

“well your a lot older now 18 I believe?” he said.

“Yes Master Kenobi today is my birthday” I turned to Padme, “And once again Lady Amidala it is a pleasure to see you again”

“Please Saria I already told you once its Padme to you and no bowing” she said.

I Nodded, “sorry lady Padme”

“Saria!”

“Sorry Padme”.

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In the meeting I watched as Anakin drooled over Padme. I also watched how Obi-Wan kept looking at me like I was going to lunge at him. The last time I had seen him was the night of Qui-Gon Jinn’s funeral. At the end of the meeting Olivay scolded me on not wearing my robe.

“I didn’t know it was going to be a meeting” I said.

“You are a padawan dress like one!” she said.

“Yes Master” I replied not wanting to fight.

“You may go do as you please” she said cooling down.

“Thank you Master” I replied and was about to leave the office intel, “Saria!” it was Padme.

“Yes La - Padme?” I asked.

“Lets go for dinner and catch up, I here there’s a great dinner ‘Coruscant
Dinah” she said.

I sighed almost wishing she would disappear, “Okay Padme”.

She smiled happily. “Great I’ll send someone to your room to pick you up”.

I stood there and nodded Intel Olivay elbowed me.

I then smiled, this smile broke Obi-Wan and Olivay’s heart, it was sad and had misery written all over it. Olivay frowned, “Go get some sleep young one”.

“Yes Master” I replied.

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